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Vampire's Crown Vampire's Crown

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Superb! Here's some feedback. Story telling was excellent. I think the character animator has some minor areas of improving. From an animators point of view, i can see the key poses a little too much, and the overlapping action is suffering. This is just purely practice though.

This doesnt detract at all from your animation guys, you did very well, and great to see such high quality, great characters, design, modelling, texturing rigging and animation.

Great work, would love to see more!


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Halo: The New Game Halo: The New Game

Rated 5 / 5 stars

LOL! Hillarious!



Party soft Party soft

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Genius.

rofl. Hillarious! :D


Superagge responds:

YEAH! ADmit it's pretty awesome! :D

Recent Game Reviews


Cannon Defense Cannon Defense

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome!

I dont really play alot of flash games but this one kept me hooked! Nice work! =D Really enjoyed it!!


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Recent Audio Reviews


Waves of Color Waves of Color

Rated 5 / 5 stars

This is an official NGUAC 2017 Audition Review.
Thank you for your personal message regarding a review on your track.

The following is an evaluation with critical analysis regarding your audition. This analysis should not reflect negatively on you as a participant but should be used to critically weigh your strengths and weaknesses which were perceived in this track. This review should be used to further your ability. Through isolation of what is important to you, choose the areas that are discussed below which you believe would advance your skills for future music production. This review is of subjective opinion.

Melodic Themes:
The themes created for Waves of Color are superb. They are captivating, charming and provocative. When listening I felt they instill a colorful palette which explores large vastness and then switches to the intricate and personal. The melodies are prominent and evident, with a perfect amount of variation without diverging or drifting into the unfamiliar. These variants of the main melody allow the revisit of the focal theme to be so much stronger.

I absolutely love what you have done with the themes. In short, they are just perfection of fun, evoking the draw of a smile which could be summed up as the perfect as a moment like flying a Kite.

Instrument Choice:
The choice of instruments compliment the main melodies portrayed and sensations you look to induce. They are bright, snappy and indicate skipping with their quick releases. The break in your track at around two minutes in where we received a sustain portrayal of the theme is where minor issue occurs. Sustain synths which were used contain little dynamic variation. Such as at 1:33 when we hear that melodic line complete, the sustain is solid and stop's dead with little release. Some of the concepts of freedom, openness, vastness are emotions which promote soaring and breathing. Therefore these Synths sustain lines would be better suited to have a release which blends into the next section, not suddenly stop dead. Use dynamics and volume automation over a duration to slowly increase and reduce attention to specific notes. Adjust dynamics to create headroom for other instruments to take focus.

The drums are nice, but they are far too repetitive in tone. The same strike is being heard, again and again. A suggestion would be to create variation in this percussive instrument. Such as by layering two or more percussion snares together. Then vary the strike time and volume of each throughout usage. Give it a human element. It's not uncommon to build percussion instruments that can become the signature sound for your track, or multiple tracks. Take time to build nice and bright snares, strong weighted kicks, complimentary toms, and varied hi-hats, etc. The concentration in creating these mixed and custom drum kits will give your percussive an original edge. For instance, it's not uncommon for me to layer 8 or more different drums for a single hit, choosing the frequencies which I like most in each, build my own kits then use them.

Composition and Consistency:
There is a lot going on, and the time signature is a great change to the 4/4. I find no problems with your structure, it's perfect imo. You have an intro, you build to theme. You then take a break from the theme with a sweet moment and then you build right back up to the final chorus.

Production :
Production is great with only minor areas to cover. The frequency mix is spot on for modern EMD production, and I mean Spot - On, because I downloaded and isolated the track. Subs and bass right in the middle. Low mids are wide, they could may be a bit less wide, but I'm not going to complain, mids and highs are nice and wide. In mono the track is closed to perfectly balanced, club ready, with just a few minor audible high frequencies around 3:30 min which could be considered borderline piercing. So take some attention to that. I love the small intricate part in your track, which sat more central, then as soon as you brought it back it was nice and wide again.

Instruments were well balanced and channel weighted appropriately. The channels communicated very well, so keep all that up! Consider EQ scanning up and down to hear those unwanted piercing frequencies to then notch down, sometimes there's elements just a touch (and I mean a touch) too tinny that need pulled down on the instrument. The kick is somewhat a bit lost, and it doesn't really come through on the low end. So although I can hear it, it makes little impact to the track, it should be a bit lower, and a bit heavier hitting partnered with your sub.

Overall Track
Overall this track was captivating, joyful, and fun. It said adventure to me with the beauty of intricate details and relationships. For someone who works on fairly emotional tracks, something that is full of life, entertaining and portrays a whimsical and joyful melodies, I believe it to be nothing less than fantastical. You would have score fairly high from me if you were in my category.

Keep up the great work, you are one to watch! (Sorry if any of this is incoherent - it's late)
Peter


Spadezer responds:

Ah man. Thanks, and I may sound like a repeating record to everyone but I really appreciate the feedback. You make me feel flattered.

Not much I can say to this aside from thank you


The Secret of Satera Prime The Secret of Satera Prime

Rated 5 / 5 stars

You get a big 'Old 5 from me!

It's such an honor for you to directly place reference to me in this. Thank you! Just hearing your voice overs and narrative that runs through this really shows how much fun we had while trying something new, and although we're were like lost puppies in a huge park the experience (and banter) made it all worth it.

I think your track exhibits a lot of effort which should be merited. The wobbles which were composed of hand drawn midi data, the concept of placing your track within a scenario works, the experimentation and usage of the unknown. I really love that bass synth sub at the start which just slowly rides in. As mentioned I get a very Scott Pilgrim from this, which is a something I really enjoy.

I loved the gaming 8bit references in this, the entire thing feels like a vintage game with modern twists. To be honest, the more I listened to this, the more I enjoy it!

Whoever goes through, it's been a blast! Speak soon!
:)

Peter


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SoundChris responds:

Hey there man!

Thanks for leaving me such a kind review - really appreciated. I think we really had A LOT OF FUN during the last week and also lots of great talking. Its sad that we were pit against eachother :( But well - we did our best to try and learn new stuff, to experiment and exchange about what we have learned and i think that was a great experience for both of us :) I also think the trailer that i have made also underlines how much fun we had :D :D :D

All the best friend! Lets talk later - i am on!

Chris


Deep Sleprivation Deep Sleprivation

Rated 0 / 5 stars

I'm not a mod. But I suggest you take this off, before you are banned.


Recent Art Reviews


Armored Rider Armored Rider

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Superb! :)



DC Trinity DC Trinity

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

As an artist who enjoys comic art, you've created a good piece of work but you have the skill though to pull away from duplicating Jim Lee's art. This, your Wolverine, Green Lantern, Batman v Superman, etc. Many won't spot the copied works, but those familiar with them will.

So use him to help you understand ground rules, techniques, inspiration, etc but I suggest you don't directly copy his art. Especially to then just to put your signature on it without giving any credit to Jim Lee, because it comes across as somewhat deceptive.


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Concept Maelstrom 2 Concept Maelstrom 2

Rated 3 / 5 stars

It's an interesting concept, but there's some lines in it that don't quite flow to continue it's elegance. Vehicles have faces, and you should keep this in mind when designing. The Line up around the front of the light coming around to the body of the car is really harsh and rigid and would have been better working into the body work. The back of the car is also looking a bit off around the rear wheel arch, it would benefit from a beefier shape around the arch of the wheel.

I also suggest watching your topology, and push yourself for smoother creation in your arcs for consistency of the model. Constantly test render, look at the car from multiple angles and importantly keep your panel gaps tight and close, don't let the geometry smooth down into them like the front of the bonnet here. Panel gaps should be a slick line down the car which doesn't impose on the flow of the shape.

My suggestion is find a high quality model of a vehicle, and look at the topology on it. Learn how we create vehicle flow and detailing and how we continue a smooth surface while having panel gaps, doors, structures etc. Then after studying the poly flow, create another vehicle, but do one that actually exists. One that will challenge your modelling talent, not your concepting talent. They're two very different skillsets, so before you start concepting more, do something which allows you to fully focus on harnessing your clean modelling ability. That means when it comes to creating a concept vehicle, it'll look slicker and much more professional.

And with every new creation, make it your intention to make a jump in quality and attention to detail. Ignore the surfacing, materials etc at this point. Get the topology spot on.