EvilRaccoon's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zeta]

Great stuff!

Yay! That's a nice Nissan. Good work on the modelling however I think your surfacing could do with some attention, your chrome is really rather bright and your body has alot of specular on it.

Your lighting is quite nice, but could cast better shadows as they are really hard, not only that, try only cast one shadow map to represent a single lightsource, even if you are using 2 or 3, it's more realistic. I like the pearlescent candy texture. It looks very Fast and Furious.

Keep it up! I've added you and your Render to my fav's.

deebznutz responds:

best review yet thanks for the advice

[Camaro]

It seems we're all doing Camaro's. :)

It seems everyone's doing Camaro's these days! Hehe. This is good, I like the scene you have put it in, however I think your window frame at the bottom looks a tad off shape wise. Your body work is 2007 however your wing mirrors are 2010 version. Big asses like me will notice stuff like that. :P

I dont know if you draw straight from your plans but maybe attempt a bezier or spline cage first so you get those curves right before poly modelling it. You can see that your door appears to be quite flat, however the car itself curves around at the doors while conveying a harsh edge.

Ive been harsh on you, but only because you have the talent. :) I'd love to see more, and Ive added you and this piece as a fav.

panchocr responds:

Thank you for the comment, and for the advice on the curves!

[Harrison MkII]

Great work!

I love the detailing with low poly work you do! Always a treat to look at your 3D stuff here!

Keep it up!

Kinsei responds:

Thank you,
I hope I can provide even better treats later on.