Based? It's Faure Pavane =P
I wouldn't say it's based on a classical track, just say to everyone that it's you playing Faure Pavane. Nobody is going to murder you for it. :P
It's good, but in comparison to the original your Violin sounds like it needs tuned. Also, if you are doing solo violin. Then really lets yourself play up close and personal. Slowly and powerfully play to us with nice quiet and strong moments, dont rush it. Add some reverb too, so it your violin doesnt sound like your in your bedroom. You have talent, so really sell yourself.
Faure Pavane to anyone who doesnt know the original. I love the BBC orchestra version...in youtube search faure pavane wimbeldon. It's the first video.