This is great! I love the melody! :D
This is great! I love the melody! :D
For anyone wanting to know what DevilSheep is talking about. We made a deal, agreeing if he made a track, then I would also dive in and make something. Well THANKYOU VERY MUCH! lol, I had no idea you would do something basically within 24 hours! You are a man of your word. FFSake...now I need to do something!
Your track is great. :D Its fantastic to hear something from you especially after all these years of silence with such dominance. It has a strong pace and drive throughout and I love how it builds and builds, I'm an absolute sucker for that. The endings beast and extremely strong supporting an awesome climax. You can't go back into silence mode after this!
...now I better make some time to keep up to my end...
Thanks Peter! :D
Nice WIP, I think you're a little dark horse waiting to get a bit more noticed for your audio talents. Keep it up.
The track is great and it's actually right up my street, I love this kind of build up orchestral composition. I did find the brass and Woodwinds a little strong, over your strings. So consider pulling them down a bit in the final version. I actually think you don't want to milk the build too much, and 6mins is quite long for the repetitive nature of it, and type of track. So consider possibly bringing that down to half the time, but make bigger jumps.
+fav +watch
Hoping to see a lot more from you.
Hey, thanks PeterSatera! I appreciate the review, as well as your suggestions to improve the WIP. I definitely agree that the balance and length could use some work, so hopefully in the next build you'll see some pretty good improvements! I have a few other pieces in the works, and I hope to have some more music out soon!
Thanks again for your kind words! Even if I don't get noticed, I'm okay with that. I've been on Newgrounds around 11 years now, and I've had a varying level of success with a few of my works, but I'm not really here to be noticed as much as I'm here to improve myself as a composer. To be honest, the thing I look forward to the most is the reviews. That's the only way I've been able to improve myself, and reviews like this definitely help me do that! :)
Thanks again!
- SP (Tiara)
Dang! This is beast! 0_O Awesome work!
This is fantastic PirateCrab!! Your mix and master is superb, and sits very well, balanced spatially. The drive in this is excellent and cannot be faulted, your themes are great and catchy too and when they change they never feel like they break the momentum. So overall a very great track which is consistently hooks the listener and is enjoyable.
I actually think a vocal or even two on top of this, which utilizes harmonies would have put this song into probable perfection for me. With the drive of the track and the superb themes I just want to sing along with lyrics, and I feel like there's room for that vocal in your mix. However, getting vocals on a track is a whole other ball game, and I can understand why they don't exist. Especially with your current time frame to develop over the first round of the NGADM. With this in mind your track from a personal stand point is well worthy or high recognition for both your talent and ability to create original and superb listening head banging tracks.
Nothing more than excellence. I look forward to hearing more, and really interested in where you develop in the future. More plz. ;)
Peter I would absolute LOVE to have vocals on this! The majority of my tracks are wrote in such a style that they can use either lead guitars for the overlying melody or vocals should the day ever come! Sadly, my vocals sound like a strangled cat ha!
Much love for the awesome review and high regards, I'll be sure to put out more veeeeeery soon :)
Those strings! 0_O!! Love this! The orchestration is superb! Take my 5!
I accept your 5 with open arms, bro home boi
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