This is fantastic PirateCrab!! Your mix and master is superb, and sits very well, balanced spatially. The drive in this is excellent and cannot be faulted, your themes are great and catchy too and when they change they never feel like they break the momentum. So overall a very great track which is consistently hooks the listener and is enjoyable.
I actually think a vocal or even two on top of this, which utilizes harmonies would have put this song into probable perfection for me. With the drive of the track and the superb themes I just want to sing along with lyrics, and I feel like there's room for that vocal in your mix. However, getting vocals on a track is a whole other ball game, and I can understand why they don't exist. Especially with your current time frame to develop over the first round of the NGADM. With this in mind your track from a personal stand point is well worthy or high recognition for both your talent and ability to create original and superb listening head banging tracks.
Nothing more than excellence. I look forward to hearing more, and really interested in where you develop in the future. More plz. ;)